SerenaSnape

So, I've written up to the second Gringotts visit and I was wondering what families Adaline should be heir or head to. I want her to have as much political power in the future as possible, but don't want to make her too mary-sueish or clichéd with it.
          	
          	I was thinking Potter (obviously), Black, Peverell and Slytherin ones for sure. Sirius could have made her his Heir in case he didn't have one. Peverell is a must because we all know that Harry was descended from the Peverell brothers. Also Slytherin by right of conquest? Or because the Peverells were brothers and descended from the Slytherin family?
          	
          	Should I add some more famous names like Gryffindor?
          	
          	What about smaller wizarding families?
          	
          	I was also thinking about an arranged marriage contract for Adaline to someone, but not sure who yet. My romance is as of yet undecided. I was thinking about pairing her with Severus in a few years (perhaps Lily could have written up the marriage contract but wasn't able to send it off to Severus before she died?).
          	
          	Please help me - I have so many ideas and I'm not sure which ones to use!

SerenaSnape

@lls7474 https://www.fanfiction.net/~bakaprincess85 (hope the link works) or just google bakaprincess85 - you should be able to find me then :)
          	  
          	  Also, thank you for liking my story. I'm trying really hard to write more, but I guess being at home saps my motivation like crazy... since I haven't been able to write anymore... I couldn't believe my eyes when 20k words flew out of me just like that when we went on holiday... I need to go on holiday more if that's what happens.
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lls7474

@SerenaSnape Hope you are going to continue 'Dawn of a New Century'...you did a SPLENDID job, covering the reading of the will...we need to get Sirius out of prison, and we need to explore just what Prof. Snape's relationship is, to the Marauders...and why.  I thought about your character getting hooked up with Draco...opposites attract?    But, I think your character has what it takes to bring out the better--and far less snobbish--traits of Draco.  It was already obvious that he couldn't really follow in his parents' "pure blood" traditions...time for Draco and any of his future descendants to blaze a new wizarding trail.  I LOVE the interplay between your character and Severus...THIS is an area that you have set up, so well--I really do hope that you get the time to continue!  Can you give me the titles of some stories that you've presented on fanfic.net?  I'm having trouble finding your author handle, "bakaprincess85," there.  Many thanks!  :>)
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SerenaSnape

So, I've written up to the second Gringotts visit and I was wondering what families Adaline should be heir or head to. I want her to have as much political power in the future as possible, but don't want to make her too mary-sueish or clichéd with it.
          
          I was thinking Potter (obviously), Black, Peverell and Slytherin ones for sure. Sirius could have made her his Heir in case he didn't have one. Peverell is a must because we all know that Harry was descended from the Peverell brothers. Also Slytherin by right of conquest? Or because the Peverells were brothers and descended from the Slytherin family?
          
          Should I add some more famous names like Gryffindor?
          
          What about smaller wizarding families?
          
          I was also thinking about an arranged marriage contract for Adaline to someone, but not sure who yet. My romance is as of yet undecided. I was thinking about pairing her with Severus in a few years (perhaps Lily could have written up the marriage contract but wasn't able to send it off to Severus before she died?).
          
          Please help me - I have so many ideas and I'm not sure which ones to use!

SerenaSnape

@lls7474 https://www.fanfiction.net/~bakaprincess85 (hope the link works) or just google bakaprincess85 - you should be able to find me then :)
            
            Also, thank you for liking my story. I'm trying really hard to write more, but I guess being at home saps my motivation like crazy... since I haven't been able to write anymore... I couldn't believe my eyes when 20k words flew out of me just like that when we went on holiday... I need to go on holiday more if that's what happens.
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lls7474

@SerenaSnape Hope you are going to continue 'Dawn of a New Century'...you did a SPLENDID job, covering the reading of the will...we need to get Sirius out of prison, and we need to explore just what Prof. Snape's relationship is, to the Marauders...and why.  I thought about your character getting hooked up with Draco...opposites attract?    But, I think your character has what it takes to bring out the better--and far less snobbish--traits of Draco.  It was already obvious that he couldn't really follow in his parents' "pure blood" traditions...time for Draco and any of his future descendants to blaze a new wizarding trail.  I LOVE the interplay between your character and Severus...THIS is an area that you have set up, so well--I really do hope that you get the time to continue!  Can you give me the titles of some stories that you've presented on fanfic.net?  I'm having trouble finding your author handle, "bakaprincess85," there.  Many thanks!  :>)
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LindsaySmith204

Hi are you doing book two in your hoping for a better future series as I really enjoyed reading the first thanks

SerenaSnape

@LindsaySmith204 I'm trying to get back my mojo for this series and rewrite the first part so that none of the book is in it but that it still flows. Like Under a Watchful eye.
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