Serenade1x1

Hey, hi, hello — I'm alive...!
          	Reports of my literary death have been greatly exaggerated. I'm just buried under real life right now and currently in the process of going back through earlier chapters and finding the kind of plot holes that make you stare at the ceiling at 3am whispering how did I miss this.
          	
          	Short version: I reread my own story, caught some things that don't quite line up, and I love you all too much to leave them broken. 
          	
          	So I'm doing some surgical rewrites on a handful of older chapters before pushing forward. 
          	
          	New chapters are still happening. 
          	The brothers are still wrecking my life. 
          	Antonio is still in the basement!
          	Nobody's getting peace anytime soon, including me.
          	
          	Thank you for sticking around while I clean house. 
          	See you very soon.!!

chereeyue

Hey sorry for posting here!!
          
          I’ve been working on this book for a while, and I finally posted the first chapter! I’d really appreciate it if you could check it out and let me know what you think.
          
          Any feedback, tips, or constructive criticism would mean a lot and help me improve. I hope you enjoy reading it!  
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/413774408?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details&wp_uname=lovellaa

Serenade1x1

Hey, hi, hello — I'm alive...!
          Reports of my literary death have been greatly exaggerated. I'm just buried under real life right now and currently in the process of going back through earlier chapters and finding the kind of plot holes that make you stare at the ceiling at 3am whispering how did I miss this.
          
          Short version: I reread my own story, caught some things that don't quite line up, and I love you all too much to leave them broken. 
          
          So I'm doing some surgical rewrites on a handful of older chapters before pushing forward. 
          
          New chapters are still happening. 
          The brothers are still wrecking my life. 
          Antonio is still in the basement!
          Nobody's getting peace anytime soon, including me.
          
          Thank you for sticking around while I clean house. 
          See you very soon.!!

Serenade1x1

I'm officially stuck... i rewrote the next chapter 7 times, still not satisfied, tbh I'm running out of ideas on how to keep this story interesting

laS3VDAA

@Serenade1x1 writhings i mean
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laS3VDAA

@Serenade1x1 imagine and keep going
            I like your readings..
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