Bhoomi2735

Hey SereneSapphire , It feels good while reading your comments , which are so constructive and shows your immersion into the story itself . I feel elated to read your comments on my story JanakiRaghaviyam. 
          I would be happy if you share your detail analysis of the story , writing style , pros and cons with me , which would be useful for me to improve myself as a writer .
          Looking forward hearing from you.
          Bhoomi

SereneSapphire

@SereneSapphire it's not 'have' here its name 
            Typo
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SereneSapphire

@Bhoomi2735 ofcourse
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Bhoomi2735

I have also started publishing a new story “two years older” .Definitely u have to read it as well
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