SeriouslySomeSad

ok i forgot to write a new chapter?
          	Ill do it as fast as possible 

SeriouslySomeSad

heyy everybodeeh even tho i only got nine of you following mee. Does anyone have any tips or tops for my story? As in opinions and whats good or bad about it. I really want to improve my writing

SeriouslySomeSad

Those are some good ideas, i already figured out how i want to do the reveal that rins a demon, but i might just steal some of this ;P. thanks for the tips!
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AvianUndead

@ TessaCookie  you should update in a pace that doesn't make people forget the story and have to reread it every time you update. Also I think a fine way of outing rin as a demon is having the regular school set up an occult club and they end up summoning a demon king which accidentaly outs rin lol then a battle with arthur. Then satan reminds rin battling is the opposite of what he should be doing then an arc abt them slowly trusting each other. This is all I got tbh, you don't have to take it to heart anyways but those r my ideas
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