Hey guys! Just a quick update about my school bus graveyard story...ummmmm...I ended up unpublishing it again. Yeah hehe...this is like the third time, and I know some of you might think it’s annoying that I don’t just stick with one version. I’m a complete overthinker, and if something feels off in my story, I kind of spiral a bit. Not like a panic attack or anything, it’s just... my brain goes a lot, and I can’t focus on bigger things in my life when something is bothering me..
I got some really helpful feedback, and I wanted to share it with you!
They like my OC and think she fits really well into the story’s dynamics that's was really sweet of her
They mentioned the emotions were a bit hard to understand, so I need to show more of what the characters are feeling
They felt there wasn’t enough interaction between Tyler and the main characters, so the relationship came across as underdeveloped
The romance didn’t really hit the way it should — the chemistry wasn’t strong enough yet
And they said my OC feels a little like Ashlyn, just a bit more likable. Not a bad thing! It just made me realize I should show more of what makes her unique
Reading all of that made me think I could do a better job making the story feel earned and natural. So I’m going to take some time to fully edit everything — improve the pacing, add more interactions, and make the romance flow better. I’m also thinking of writing a brand-new prologue to show how Tyler and Celine meet, so their connection doesn’t feel sudden.
I’m super busy right now, but once school calms down a bit, I’ll be updating! Don’t worry, I’m not discontinuing it — I just want to make it the best it can be for you all. ^^ and I like hearing feedbacks like this so please if you do see things that needs fixing in my story please do like! But no hate is allowed please? My heart can't take that haha.
Byeeeee! :>
