Author Luna

Hey there.. Sorry for posting here without permission. I'm a new author, its my first ff. Can you please look at it, and give me feedback, so I can decide whether to continue writing it or stop. It's my first ever story I don't know how good I am.. 
          
          
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/388402953?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=Winsome24