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I really appreciate for reading my friend's story, but please wag naman kayo puro criticize lng ng story niya. Hindi niya ito gingawa para magiging famous unlike you na kulang sa pansin at walang magawa sa buhay pero kase she loves to write and is passionate about it. And above all, your words will not bring her down because she is a strong person. If you have nothing better to say, then it's better to shut the fuck up. Love you lots mwa❤