SexiPrincessTice

I am new at this and I am posting a new novel I am working on, I am posting each chapter. Can you please read them and tell me what you think? IF I need to change something, edit it for the better or need to edit and delete some stuff? Do I need to add more information or delete information? Is it easy to follow or do I need more transitional paths? Critical thoughts will help me a lot. Thank you. Colleen