I’ve changed chapter 1.
- The story is essentially the same.
- Every line is written differently because I thought it was the weakest chapter in terms of writing.
- I added more scenes, such as the ones with Nate and Elena at the beginning.
- I tried to add more suspense at the end of this chapter. For yk to make the next chapter more interesting and stuff
Chapter 2 will be changing drastically because it will have significantly impact on the new chapter which is currently in development.
Therefore, I need to rewrite chapter 2 so that it makes sense.