ShaaliRMS

After some delay, Chapter 5 is finally here. Please be aware of a trigger warning in this one as it deals with some pretty heavy emotions and an attempt to end them. Definitely one of our hardest chapters during this rewrite and it made me cry a few times. Hope you guys enjoy this deeper insight into the Baron.
          	I just published "(Rewrite)" of my story "Quiet, Quaint & Dangerous ". https://www.wattpad.com/1212093329?utm_source=android&utm_medium=profile&utm_content=share_published&wp_page=create_on_publish&wp_uname=ShaaliRMS&wp_originator=W8dgC2O9wkkLnvvn5f5hh5mDI6LPyC8etgfGLXsbTmqSPRxtjAZQSqWIhrncQ5QaZs7dRAmofxm4nQ%2F2zZxhEtcVQorT6qc3muTIaOaISC3%2BTQLne7aAQuu2YdVHL6nH

ShaaliRMS

After some delay, Chapter 5 is finally here. Please be aware of a trigger warning in this one as it deals with some pretty heavy emotions and an attempt to end them. Definitely one of our hardest chapters during this rewrite and it made me cry a few times. Hope you guys enjoy this deeper insight into the Baron.
          I just published "(Rewrite)" of my story "Quiet, Quaint & Dangerous ". https://www.wattpad.com/1212093329?utm_source=android&utm_medium=profile&utm_content=share_published&wp_page=create_on_publish&wp_uname=ShaaliRMS&wp_originator=W8dgC2O9wkkLnvvn5f5hh5mDI6LPyC8etgfGLXsbTmqSPRxtjAZQSqWIhrncQ5QaZs7dRAmofxm4nQ%2F2zZxhEtcVQorT6qc3muTIaOaISC3%2BTQLne7aAQuu2YdVHL6nH

ShaaliRMS

⚡ Important Update⚡
          
          The decision has been made to incorporate the flashbacks thought of and written later where they belong into the earlier chapters of Quiet, Quaint & Dangerous. This will only affect Chapters 1-3, with the addition of one or maybe two more added, thus the eventual numbering of each chapter as well.
          
          Long after first starting, we came up with some really good ideas to fill in the time jumps within and between these chapters. These help to add depth and reason to why Zemo began to let down his walls and allow Shaali to help him; why and how he escaped from the Raft; and why the two eventually fell so head over heels for each other. 
          
          By putting these in the main story these key scenes and emotional occurrences will make far more sense. 
          
          This will take time so please be patient with us as we work it out and again, THANK YOU so much for reading.
          
          ~ Chapter 1 is up . Hope you enjoy the additional scenes .

ShaaliRMS

Hello everyone, 
          
          Thank you to those choosing to read this beautiful collaborative piece. I've said it before many times but I can't thank Ray enough for agreeing to this with me. I mean, seriously, who would've thought a simple and very hopeful DM request would end up turning into a now 17+ chapter story with graphics, artist renderings and even a comic attached?!
          
          Every time I think about it I smile so much. It's an authors dream to write something so emotionally real but to have that happening with another person involved is just the greatest feeling ever! Please let us both know what you think of it so far. We'd love to hear your thoughts and constructive criticism .
          
          Hey Ray... you're awesome! Fact. 
          
          Sincerely,
          Mana
          
          

m_marchesi

Thank you so much, it means a lot to me, and so dose this story of course. It’s an absolute work of art. I’m so happy it’s out here for others to read as well. Feedback is always welcome, hope you all enjoy! Mana is one of the, if not the greatest writer I’ve ever had the pleasure to write with. Thank so much. 
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