Shaddow_pet

 Chapters are going to be missing, but only temporarily. The reason for that is because they are undergoing some editing. Chapters 1&2 have been revised and I'm currently on chapter three. I'm unpublishing chapter by chapter so I can edit and republish. I didn't want to unpublish the whole book because it could scare peeps into thinking the book has been deleted. I know it is a bit inconvenient but I promise it will be worth it.
          	
          	The reasons for the edits is because things were starting to sound a little boring. Reading back on the other chapters, I realized that they were kinda dry. They didn't have as much life into them as I would have liked them to have. A revision was much needed.
          	
          	The edits will include:
          	
          	- better spelling, less typos
          	
          	-improved dialogue with more emotions
          	
          	-and a better flow of events. While my pacing wasn't awful, it did need a tune up.

Shaddow_pet

 Chapters are going to be missing, but only temporarily. The reason for that is because they are undergoing some editing. Chapters 1&2 have been revised and I'm currently on chapter three. I'm unpublishing chapter by chapter so I can edit and republish. I didn't want to unpublish the whole book because it could scare peeps into thinking the book has been deleted. I know it is a bit inconvenient but I promise it will be worth it.
          
          The reasons for the edits is because things were starting to sound a little boring. Reading back on the other chapters, I realized that they were kinda dry. They didn't have as much life into them as I would have liked them to have. A revision was much needed.
          
          The edits will include:
          
          - better spelling, less typos
          
          -improved dialogue with more emotions
          
          -and a better flow of events. While my pacing wasn't awful, it did need a tune up.

littlestar1106

Hi I was wondering if you could repost chapter 3 it is not there. Sorry to bother you.

Shaddow_pet

@KaylaKondrad side note to this, if you notice anything that could use improving in the chapters following that, let me know ^-^ I'm going chapter by chapter and if there is any way I can make them easier for you to read, don't hesitate bring it to my attention
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Shaddow_pet

As stated in my previous message board, I am revising previous chapters. Chapter three is staying down for a moment so I can finish editing it. I promise I will put it back up at some point today though since I'm already halfway through editing it ❤️
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Shaddow_pet

Just a heads up, you may see a lot of posted updates from me. I am slowly editing some of the previous chapters. Why am I doing this in the middle of the book rather than the end you may ask? Simple answer is...its bugging the ever living crap out of my adhd.
          
          Normally when I write, I refer to the previous chapters a lot to try and keep everything consistent. The one flaw to that is, I start critiquing the other chapters I've written because it feels so dull and bleh. Everytime I go back in chapters, I get the strong urge to fix it and I can't fight that urge any longer ‍
          
          I do not know why I am the way I am but please bear with me as I hyperfixiate on adjusting the chapters in a way that pleases my brain

koki909090

i got a notification about chapter 15 but i can't read it it says that tjere is a problem!

Shaddow_pet

@koki909090 are you guys still unable to read it? I can try republishing it maybe? Srry bout long wait for a response
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GreysonTuck

I was just coming over to say the exact same thing. I hope everything is okay
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