ShadowStrikesStories
If you want a re-write, here's what will change:
- Aspen, Jackson, Solarite, Wallance and Harvey will be scrapped off the story
- Flamingstar and Blizzard will be Crazy Dave's daughters
- Lunis will be transgender (FtoM), if it was a series, Lunis would have a feminine voice and may still have eyelashes, but overall they will be a boy from now on
- Walter will still be in S2, but from now on, Cactus and Chomper are scrapped
- Unika is still a new plant to Neighborville, as much you saw in S1, she's from Jamaica and moved to Vancouver, Neighborville
- The changes will also mean no art unfortunately, I have no time to draw at all so... sorry!!
- Claw is scrapped off the script for good
- S3 will have major changes, Timmy will be present but the plot of The Power Mints I don't like it so S3 will get full rewrite!
- For S2, I plan to introduce all plants from all worlds at the ending instead so the world's are still empty! Not much changes, just the introduction of all plants and Cactus and Chomper are no longer Canon
- Zomboss will act more from the games from now on, yes he's a bad guy but fighting plants himself hand to hand made no sense at least for me, unlike other zombies he's a genius so he will act more from the games
- I'm not sure if it's a good idea yet, but if you know Patrice and Nate, let me know if you want them in the story and I'll find a spot for them! Maybe they can show up around the beggining of S3
- Forest is the only child of Andrew and he is in a comatose when Crazy Dave found him,he wakes up once he's entering his teen years, and due to that, he developed amnesia, so his memories are gone until further notice
- the crystals plot and Forest Fire's form will still be happening, that's important of the story!
- Penny is built EARLIER
- Forest's Toyhouse will be updated
Let me know if you wish a rewrite of this SAGA! I'd be happy to upgrade this story!
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Kaylaceratops
But again… just a suggestion. And that I hope the story meets your interest, and on what you’re aiming for
Kaylaceratops
P.S. I also love how the plants have their own unique skills, and thoughts about getting this, going for this, or should we go for this or that, or stick with this and see where that goes situations, and by not only caring for themselves but also caring for forest as well. Since forest was trying to be the hero but forgets that he still doesn’t know what type of plantson he wants to be, while he’s friends and he’d gf depend him from zomboss, similar how they depended him with claw. And for the finally, I loved how forest’s sisters were worried for him, because they knew in their hearts that forest can’t defend himself from zomboss or at least that’s what his friends and his sisters, especially his girlfriend, since she to knows that he can’t fight zomboss on his own, even if forest doesn’t want to admit it to zomboss, his friends, and his girlfriend, and I loved how emotional it felt, I thought it also captured those moments so well, and I thought you did amazing on those scenes, based on the situations that they were in.
Kaylaceratops
But I got to admit that in the comics, I love how funny, goofy, and uh no moments that he has, while having he’s intensely, deadly serious moments as well. Plus also the personality that he has in your original story, that I thought described zomboss very well on, and also has those personalities traits that he sometimes shows in the comics as well, when he has he’s mind set on something very important for mostly him, but for the zombies as well. But Those are just my suggestions… I love to see what you come up with though and see how the story goes. I hope that you have fun making the remake/rewrite/remastered version of the story.
