Shadowranger

i am editing Mysteries of the eerie forest

Lets_Hi5

Hey I’m a newbie here and I need feedback.
          My story is called Unholy Matrimony.
          I entered in the 'Watty Awards' and need your votes!
           (And no it doesn't have vampires and werewolves but has loads of demons and monsters :P)
          
          Here's the summary.
          
          Layla had a fairly normal life; she had loving parents, a crazy best friend, and the world at her perfectly manicured feet. But things took a turn for the worse when she was kidnapped and taken to the underworld to compete with other human and non-mortal girls as queen. Not only does she hate the Prince whose perfect idea of a first date is leaving you in a room with a monster, but he is still not over his first love's "death". How will Layla survive? And well she be able to find love in the unexpected.
          
          DUN..DUN..DUN
          
          lol, just had to do that.

Unknown2me

Could you read my story Running From Them, Running To You please? It's about a girl, Auden, who runs from home with the hopes that it will help her family out. She lives on her own for about six months until her situation is discovered and she is sent to live at a foster home. There she meets Will Parks, the heart throb of the school, who's past haunts him more than anyone knows. Auden and Will are pulled to each other, but neither of them are willing to relinquish their story. They come to find that it is impossible to build a relationship if it is started on a foundation of lies. Read my story and leave a comment in my story "Post Here If You Want Me To Read Yours" thing and I'll make sure to read yours. Thank you!

kastingdreams

hey if you have the time i would appreciate it if you would check  out my new story im working on its called Think of You
          
          After the death of her older brother, 16 year old, Eva trys living with the grief, and forgetting. Living with secrets and hiding the pain. Depression takes over as the first year anniversary of her brothers death is coming right around the corner. Life changes as she meets the new boy in town, 18 year old, Jake. He teaches her to open up and let happiness in and as their relationships grow can she let go and live. Can she admit to herself the truths, that have been locked up for years, or better yet, which one is the worst...
          
          check it out! thx ;)
          
          http://www.wattpad.com/501319-think-of-you-part-1