Patlangley
Hey @Shadowy_Corruption, I just finished reading your story, and it’s such a cozy and heartfelt moment between Goh and Ash! You captured their personalities so naturally the exhaustion, the friendship, and that quiet, comforting tone really come through beautifully. I could almost feel the nighttime calm around them and Cinderace’s sleepy charm added such a sweet touch. Your writing has great visual potential. I could easily imagine this scene in illustration form or as part of a short comic. I’m an artist and also offer services such as: Character illustrations & scene artwork Book covers & e-book adaptations Publishing support & proofreading Audiobook narration If you’re ever interested in visualizing this story or turning it into a creative project, I’d love to chat about ideas! Best regards, Olivia