ShannonTheAuthorArt

Hey there! Sorry for kinda taking a bit of a hiatus, we’re back with more Kirby Run! Sorry for the wait!

Marcy653

SHANNON, WHEN WILL THE NEXT CHAPTER OF KIRBYRUN COMING OUT!!!!!!! I CAN’T WAIT SO PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ!!!!!!!!!!!

Marcy653

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Marcy653

Two Days?!?!?! That’s where I have to go to school though
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ShannonTheAuthorArt

It’s in development! Don’t worry! It’ll be done in the next two days or so ;)
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Marcy653

Shannon, I LOVE THE KIRBY RUN, I ALSO MADE A CRK READING LIST?!?!?!?!, but also here’s the question…
          
          What Happened to Meta Knight???. Did he found the Dark Cacao Kingdom, Did He meets Caramel Arrow Cookie, or etc…

ShannonTheAuthorArt

Yo omg thank you so much for your comment! It’s always nice to see support for this project as it means a lot to me! As for your question, you’ll find out what happened to Meta Knight in a few chapters, but you’re not too far off! ;3
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BladeclawX

Kirby Run is already one of my favourites because they are some of my favourite video game franchise's. I hope Kirby and his friends, both old and new meet the ancient heroes!!! Keep up the good work!!!

ShannonTheAuthorArt

Awww thank you so much! And yes, the characters will be meeting the Ancient Heroes later in the story!
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ShannonTheAuthorArt

Hey everyone, wanted to make a quick apology post to those who read Kirby Run on Wattpad, for those who were here before I rewrote a portion of the story, you’ll know that I made the fic unavailable for awhile. I did this so people wouldn’t read the old version, as I wasn’t really comfortable with people reading it, especially since it was going to be changed. I at first made only the chapters I was going to rewrite unavailable, but even though I had notified people some were still upset they couldn’t read the whole thing, which is fair. 
          Seeing this, and realizing newcomers wouldn’t like that there are chapters missing, I decided to hide the entire work until I finished rewriting what I needed to. It took awhile, and I genuinely do apologize for that, plus the fact that the story was unavailable for so long. Rest assured this won’t happen again, and I appreciate those who were willing to wait, despite how long it took me. And now that the fic is public again I hope you all enjoy it. 
          One more thing before I go, Kirby Run is now available on AO3! 
          
          https://archiveofourown.org/users/ShannonTheAuthorArt/series
           
          Be sure to check it out there too if you want! 
          
          My apologies once again, and thank you for reading. <3

Mrgriaffe

I'm surprised few have commented on here, so I'll leave something. Writer to writer, your latest work shows much promise. Certainly, you have an eye for the important things such as grammar, pacing, immersion, and so on. I do suggest toning the number of characters down a tad, as too many can slow the pacing to a speed like a sloth wearing shoes filled with depleted uranium Lego. Other than that, keep up the good work.

ShannonTheAuthorArt

Oh thank you so much! 
            Yeah, I’m trying to make sure I don’t have too many characters, as I don’t want the story to feel too cluttered, but it is a little tricky. At the very least, I do plan on having the characters I am including to have a part in the story. Thank you so much for the tip though! And thank you for the feedback!
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