
Lyricalgift1
You are a very gifted author. I cried and became so angry on Layla’s behalf for being a willing participant to everyone walking all over her and allowing Kenneth to do whatever he wanted and be like a loyal puppy waiting for him to dog her out some more.. I also hated that everybody got a happy ending almost immediately , including Kenneth and Rella while Layla’s was dragged out to the very end. Keneth and Rella faced no consequences - how is that fair? This was almost the story of Ken and his cruel and dirty antics more so than about Layla. I look forward to more of your work but hopefully without the main character bring a doormat.

ShantaAddison
I really appreciate all the support and encouragement from everyone. I can’t express what it means to me. Thank you so much for taking the time to read my work. I’m glad you enjoyed it.
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