ShanzHenri

Hey 
          I'm new here and I just wrote my first story. I love for you guys to read my story and comment. Tell me if it's good. It's called Don't hate cuz I'm cute and sweet; Hate cuz you can't compete. Long title I know. 
          Thank you

Could you please read my story.. its called " Soofia's Life" Its about a white girl falling for a black boy and her life basically.
          Please read, vote and comment.. 
          Thanks x 
          

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          ND COMMENT~VOTE 
          IF YU LYK IT

Hello,
          
          If you like sket stories please read mine I will read yours too 
          
          http://www.wattpad.com/367701-if-i-were-a-boy-skets-these-days-rape

read my story. thanks. hope you'll like it.
          
          ' here are some lines.
          
          I went to their table and said, “Hey, Queenie, aren’t you aware of the school’s rules and regulations? Like, no shouting and …” and then I turned to Zack “no flirting?!”
          
          “Hey, Miss Anna Marie Claire Myrtle, can’t you just mind your own business?!” Queenie said. Everyone was shocked of what she said.
          
          “Nobody ever dared to talk to her like that.” I heard some people saying. My brother and cousin were just laughing.
          “Go follow your, stupid girlfriend, stupid jerk!” I told Zack.
          
          “I told you she’s not my girlfriend.” He said in a calm manner.
          
          “Oh, really! What is she to you then? Another girl to play with?” I told him in a sarcastic tone. I was teary-eyed and again I felt the pain. After seconds, tears slowly fell down.