Hey guys, I would like your thoughts on things that you might like to see in, The Drowning Boy, and if there are things you think that I should hit on more, or just your thoughts in general. Being a new writer is often difficult, because I'm still learning, and make mistakes. Life has been stressful lately, and I was going to end The Drowning boy with that last chapter, but realized from of my readers comments that I wasn't doing my characters justice. They don't deserve to be tossed aside, and you guys don't deserve that either.
-M