Shauyou1998
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Hi everyone. I’ll be taking a short break for a few days, so updates may be slow. Thank you for your patience and support
desireparul
Hello everyone..
Author has assigned me to continue with the story further. Although i dont know about the original plot twist of the author.
so i will write mine .
Author may feel low or may be facing a hard time in her life. But i cant deny her request.
So please continue your love and support the story you loved from the author. I will write the story on my account - desireparul.
Please dont hate me ,i just cant deny author request..
Love you all
Shauyou1998
Hi everyone. I’ll be taking a short break for a few days, so updates may be slow. Thank you for your patience and support
Shauyou1998
Sorry for the last "Divorce." Like I was thinking of it for so long but if life don't give me tangerines and lemons, I will write it full but omegaverse.
Thank you .
baobao_kipookie
@Shauyou1998 how can it end there? So hua yong actually moved on? You wont explain all that? No happy ending?
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lyrielleie
hiiii!! how are youu??
lyrielleie
@lyrielleie thank you!! wdym new a story? huhu I'm not going to continue my stories anymore:(
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Shauyou1998
@choqiulate Ohh no! I will try and wait for her.
lyrielleie
can I suggest you a story
lyrielleie
@lyrielleie I mean, the number of characters are limited and I already cut but still not working
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lyrielleie
hey! when you write their love scene, what comes to your mind? I need advice from you
choqiulate
hiii ! I will comment on my idea here since you are asking for help (soft land) I don't want you to stop it huhuh
maybe try in the next chapters, you could focus more on uncovering who really sent the pictures, because it would be such a strong twist if wenlang isn’t actually the one behind it and someone else is manipulating everything. at the same time, you could slowly build the emotional tension between huayong and shaoyou like huayong struggling with trust but still unable to stay away, and shaoyou feeling overwhelmed by guilt and the fear of ruining things again. It would also be powerful to add a confrontation where hidden truths about the accident or the past start coming out. I think combining these mystery conflicts, and slow-burn development would make the next chapters even more intense and meaningful.
it's funny cuz what if you actually did it so I spoiled myself hahahaha but this is just my idea to keep the story interesting. you can pick any ideas you want! happy valentine's ... :)
choqiulate
@qiuchuuuu life really can be overwhelming sometimes. If I could, I’d give you the biggest hug right now. please be kind to yourself. you don’t have to carry everything alone, and you don’t have to be strong all the time. (:)
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nychelreii
good morning author, are you not going to publish your old stories anymore? I miss reading them