When a person is writing anything, they have to be open to criticism. Because I want nothing more than to create stories that people actually want to read, I have no problem accepting feedback. With that being said, I am going to revise chapter 4. To my followers, thanks for reading, and I hope that you continue this journey with me. Hopefully Chapter 4 and 5 will post this week.
Special thanks to my street consultant KP. Good looking out.