lollipop92010

Hello my dear author, hope you haven't given up writing. This is an incredible book, especially as a first time writer. I have read quite a bit. Your character development, timing the povs and descriptions are amazing, plot line was well chosen. I thought something was wrong because there were not any comments!  I request you to continue this story and keep the character development. Also just a suggestion, please give povs chapters of some of the side characters as well!

lollipop92010

@lollipop92010 I'm so glad to hear that! Keep up the good work and dont give up just yet. You can find ways to advertise your story aswell!
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Shay_kq

@lollipop92010 i dont know if I replied to this but if I didn’t here I am- thank you so much for your commentary. I truly do appreciate it. The main reason I gave up is because I had no motivation to continue. Im really thinking about starting it back up again seeing the readers that like my story. Thank you regardless.
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