Lionqueen0303
Thanks for the accommodation I will definitely look into that and probably I will.
Lionqueen0303
Can't wait and your welcome I'm always here to help if you have any more questions.
ShayurL
@Lionqueen0303 and hey you know. I always wanted a Kion x Jasiri book. There are a few but not many good ones and I know alot of people that like that ship. You should look into it and see if you can write a book about it
Lionqueen0303
Yes I loved the new chapter and here’s a little secret when I first started out barely anyone was reading my story’s but I continued writing them because it was fun and gave me something to do but after a while more people started to read them and as I made more plot twists to my story’s the more people read them so I suggest you give it a little while for your story to get recognized and maybe throw in an interesting twist. Hope that help and I am looking forward to seeing your new chapter.
ShayurL
@Lionqueen0303 thanks so much. I'm gonna do that and also thank you for mentioning my book at the end of the chapter. I think that helped a bit aswell. And I'm uploading chapters daily so you'll see the next one tommorow !
Lionqueen0303
lol jasiri help'd me learn Swahili and I'm so happy it's working that more people are reading your book. Thanks I didn't realize it at first but I began my writing career in fourth grade and won 3rd out of the whole class so that might of had something to do with it lol 3 years. But I'm most excited that I found a new friend.
ShayurL
@Lionqueen0303 hey uh. I know this isn't your problem and all but I feel like no one's reading my book. I mean I love writing it but more people needs to read it. Do you have any tips??
Lionqueen0303
Your welcome I'm just glad you are trying something new and are doing so well in it and ya having someone like your book does feel pretty good.
ShayurL
@Lionqueen0303, haha, it does. I noticed you voted for my book and put my book at the end of the chapter. Asante, as Jasiri says, lol. Thank you, sm. It may seem not a lot, but I'm seeing an increase in people reading my book. I'll do the same for you, and yeah, it does feel pretty good, but hey, I learned from the best.
Lionqueen0303
Aww thanks I am so glad you like my books. I would be happy to get you started and mention you at the end of the next chapter of King Kion and Queen Rani's Life at the Tree of life. I will be the first one to read you new book.
ShayurL
@Lionqueen0303 yeah I was doing it short just to see how'd it come out. You have no idea how it feels to have someone like my book lol thank you. And for the parts I'm 100% gonna make it longer ty for the recommendation
Lionqueen0303
you're doing amazing for your first time but just to make it more interesting and worth reading I would recommend making your parts a little longer. Maybe 1-2 min which is about 300-600 words. I know it might seem a lot for your first time and you 100% don't have to do it because I'm just here to help with recommendations but it would help just by making it a little longer. Can't wait for your next chapter because I'm excited to see what is going to happen next and I just remembered one thing. You know how you kinda left it on a cliffhanger, well if your do a couple more of those, (not all the time) it makes people come back and read more.
ShayurL
@Lionqueen0303 thank you so much. I'm gonna try and publish the next part today so please check if it's right lol