PanchoAlberto9

Friend is your fanfic and you do what you want to do, but I told you that it would be quite good if the ship is Nazuna Asahina x Kiyotaka, or at least put interactions between them since there are almost no fanfics about them, you can make Kiyotaka meet Nagumo and from there you make interactions or whatever. It is only a recommendation.

PanchoAlberto9

Friend please look at the Izaya-Hasegawa fanfic in more detail, I recommend that you do like him and put longer interactions since they are very short and direct, in addition try to put more thoughts of Kiyotaka, and please do chapters of tranquility also and do not advance so fast to the story. I tell you as a recommendation since I love your fanfic, and if you don't want Kiyotaka to be so similar to Izaya-Hasegawa's fanfic, just make Kiyotaka go koenji style. And finally due to the popularity of Kiyotaka make interactions with senpais.

Shaziiiiii

@PanchoAlberto9 firstly, Thank you for your feedback! It is appreciated. I have read self-test by Izaya-hasegawa and I personally love his fic. I have also noticed how fast the story is going and I will try to rectify with longer conversations and monologues going into the future, but I am not an experienced writer and I am definitely not as good as hasegawa. So I ask that you be patient with my writing as I try to improve it. Thank you again!
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chicken_reunion

do u update everyday??

Shaziiiiii

@OMGitsRimuru I do update everyday, but my mock exams start In 2 days so I will maybe only do 1 part per day for the next two weeks.
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