Hi...I've accidentally stumbled upon your story and glad that I did. I made it a point to follow your other stories too. You are a gifted writer and like your narrating style.
Just read the update of Empire of Silk today and gave the feedback. Just want to clarify that the feedback didn't mean to offend the writer. The story is your baby and you write it the way you plan the plot to be. Also it was very clear in the summary what to expect from this particular story. It is a terrific plot , very well written. I usually don't have the habit of giving feedback to all the stories I read ...but the few that really make an impact. The feedback is just the expression of what I felt while reading...just sharing the feelings that's all. I don't expect the writer to change anything against what was planned. Infact I feel that giving a feedback is appreciation of writers ability to evoke those thoughts. I like the story and truly admire the writer's ability to the craft.when I wrote "hope Arnav fires Lavanya" , it was just a spontaneous worry that she might cause more trouble between the couple.. who are yet to get to know each other fully and learning the ropes of maintaining their relationship. Its a gradual process. But by expressing that , I never expect the writer to change the plot if it is planned any other way. Merely letting the author know that her work is being followed , appreciated and just expressing the feelings evoked. Hope to let you know my intentions behind the feedback.
Like your stories and follow them diligently. All the best for your future endeavours.
