Now that Ive gone through chaps seems off you have such talent please make another with your OC love her but her abilities seem to vanish adter a few chaps....no mating issues/needs desires scenting/marking too much time passes no goddess of war or split personality, no Major god of war no connection just after all she does for them and goes through your OC loss. It seems he doesnt NEED Her you have amazing talent and a Great storyline but no need/desire/want no his POV or seemingly need Its a bit confusing would LOVE Another story similar but perhaps more detail and romance lol either way Keep writing and thanks!!!