@Sarcastic_Lemons A fellow GLEE lover I see? How did you feel about him Sebastian? I mean I hated him but at the same time...I loved him. I feel so conflicted with his character
Read it. It's really good so far however if you want to improve it slightly, make the paragraphing easier to read. No offence, but it just reminds me of poetry. Other than that, I like the idea and all the guys are sexy af (mostly Francisco the bae)