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Hello!
          
           I know this is annoying but this is the only thing I can gain attention. I'm just wondering if you have a time of the day to read my works or one of my works esp "Life in a tangled web" and "Art from the heart." which is a poetry.
          I’m really looking forward for sincere criticism to improve my writing.
          Thank you	
          
          -unica