Sher1201

I have yet to watch the show I’m so excited!!
          	(Me trying to fit the aspects of the show to my fanfic I’ve been writing for four years)

MaciejHasbeen

I've got to say, I absolutely love the book, each chapter is written with so much care and passion, I really do admire you and how much work you put into the entire story. Your book is for sure one of, if not the best fanfic I've read by all means. I haven't read the entire book, I'm still on chapter 34, but I'm dying with every moment to read more, it's just so interesting. You're very talented, the way you write is just amazing. Words really can't describe how amazing you and your book is. I really hope you keep writing this book and other ones in the near future, I know it probably interferes with your personal life to write often, but you're very skilled at it, I'd love to see another 56 chapters of "What once was" minimum (the more the better of course, don't worry I won't complain if there were to be another couple hundred chapters), JK. But I'd be delighted if that were to be possible. Once again thank you for willingly putting so much effort in this masterpiece, I hope you don't get discouraged from writing this book, and also in general. The way I was able to emotionally connect with the characters more specifically Alastor and Charlie and their bond, is something I've looked for in many books and was lucky to come across in your book. You're doing great, and we're all so proud of you. Just writing this comment brought me so much genuine joy and excitement. Remember we're all here for you and you're doing great. I hope too see more of the book. I wish you the best, take care.

Sher1201

Thank you so much for your kind words <333 I’m so happy you get to enjoy the book I’ve written, and I’m so happy that you acknowledge the effort and passion I put into each chapter as it inspires me to keep on writing for you and for other readers <333  thank you to dear reader for writing me such a heartfelt message that inspires me and allows me to keep on writing like this means so much to me and even more that you enjoy it as well!!! <333 but yes writing them is very time consuming as I have so many thing so would like to incorporate to make the chapters be more meaningful.  But thank you for being so understanding and kind <3 I wish you the best and for you to take care of yourself! I would love to hear any thoughts or opinions regarding any chapters so I can best accommodate things and help me better the story. And I’m so happy and excited you love it so far! Thank you so much this highlighter my day <333
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StoryGem15

When is the next chapter coming out? I've been dying to read it.

Sher1201

Sorry for the wait! I’m currently writing it but It’s going to be a mouthful in my opinion, and while I was writing it I thought of scenes that Idk to include already or wait for their own chapter. But it should be out by the end of the week
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Soundwave-19

I love your story. The plot of it is something that I couldn't imagine coming from a fan ship. It kept me entertained and the flashbacks were something unique I never saw a story on this app (Well the books I've read so far) do. It gave a great backstory to the characters we are seeing and how they are all connected. I didn't need any cool fight scenes to keep myself entertained, the simple conflict between characters that revealed new plot points and overall progressed development was sufficient enough (although I do want to see Alastor kick some ass sometimes). What I really loved about this story as well is the slow burn Charlie and Alastor's relationship is taking to blossom into something more after her memory wipe. Overall I'll give this book an 8/10 only because of some grammar issues. I absolutely love how you're portraying things and keep up the good work. I can't wait for the next chapter.

Sher1201

Thank you so much for your kind words and for your support! <3 I planned the sorry since back in 2020 and it’s just been expanding like I have so many drafts about the what ifs and the major juicy details. But thank you I’m so glad that you enjoy it because it’s time consuming like there are small details I put in the chapters that do come relevant for future purposes. I would like to include an Alastor fight scene but I’m not good at writing action lol! Thank you so much for your rating it means a lot !!! But yeah there were so many alternatives I wanted to do for the ship and how they got to this point but I think I finally chose on a final one though unless I see something in the show and then implant it here. Also yeah sorry about the spelling mistakes I mostly just update the fanfic at night cause I can focus more but at the same time not so good for my spelling mistakes lol! But thank you once again for your support and hope you enjoy the new chapter! I’m hoping to get another one done quite soon!
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PrincessPandora123

Hi, SherlinP12. I love your story and it gives me goosebumps whenever I read it. Please be able to update it more often. Thanks.

Sher1201

Hi PrincessPandora123, thank you so much it reallly means a lot and I’m so glad you enjoy my story (more goosebumps will soon come) and I will! Hopefully by the end of the year I manage to finish it. Once again thank you for your kind words! <3
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Abandoned_Child

Hello! I just wanted to say that I am such a huge fan of your story! I cannot wait to read more of it when you upload again. It has very quickly become one of my favorite stories, and coming from a lifelong reader, that takes a lot! I am so obsessed with the way you're portraying things, especially the love story between Al and Charlie in the 1920's! 

Sher1201

I’m so sorry for just seeing this (my phone sucks at displaying the apps notifications)  but literally thank you so much like I’m so happy you enjoy my story so much! I’ll do my best this year to post more often! Thank you so much it literally means a lot <3
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TheDarkEmperor

How you doing 

TheDarkEmperor

@SherlinP12 I hope to see it soon 
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Sher1201

@TheDarkEmperor happy late birthday! And I am. College has been busy lately, I do have the draft for chapter 20 but I need to edit some things. Sorry for the wait  
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TheDarkEmperor

@SherlinP12 good I'm 20 now also are you still continuing the story?
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