Shantelle18
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Shantelle18
I keep thinking that maybe people have gotten bored with my story over time....my reads get lower with every chapter. I've got a few regular readers but it's hard keeping them. Is my story missing anything? Does it need more action or more back story etc etc?
Shantelle18
Thanks for the advice. I don't wanna have an action chapter and then another action chapter you know? I agree about the shopping chapters though. I just didn't think of that.
Sherrysteele
@Shantelle18 i think maybe longer chapters. the last two seemed like fillers which you definitely do need in books but not a lot happened in either chapter. you probs could have put the two together instead of breaking the shopping trip into 2.
Shantelle18
Thanks for picking up on my error. Lol it was such an obvious one! I'm still going over chapter 17 atm. It's got a bit of detail in it and I've had to do my research on it for it to make sense.
Sherrysteele
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@Shantelle18 no problemo. i think its the bext sentence it says shot instead of shit too.
JoyCronje
Is it insomnia? Or something similar? So I'm guessing Wattpad is a great distraction then, right?
Sherrysteele
@JoyCronje its called Ehlers-danlos syndrome and unfortunately insomnia is just one of the many symptoms. wattpad is an awesome distraction! Especially when I find a good author.
JoyCronje
@Sherrysteele ooh. Never been to Melbourne but I hear it's lovely. You are up so late! And thanks, it's down to 10mins now. Yasssss.
JoyCronje
@Sherrysteele. Aww so sweet. We are 6hrs behind you then. Unless You're on the east coast.. 30mins till I leave the office and they're feeling so long!!
Sherrysteele
@JoyCronje lts 12.50am here. I am in Melbourne, Victoria. I hope the last 30 minutes of your work day fly by. x
JoyCronje
@sherrysteele. What he said*points up* I also stopped in to mention the kid in ur pic is so cute. Mine is similarly adorable and now I'm missing her, sitting at the office.
Sherrysteele
@JoyCronje thanks so much. loving your story. I'm in australia so my little ladies are snoozing atm.
Cashjo
Hi Sherry Steele!
You name sounds like you should be a badass detective solving murders in a crime ridden city!
Anyway Just saying thanks for voting on our book Blink, all the way to 21!
Awesome.
Steve & @JoyCronje
Sherrysteele
@Cashjo haha thanks i think my name is pretty awesome! I'm enjoying your story. I'm glad John is back to his old self.
Shantelle18
@Sherrysteele I've not heard mole in such a long time it gave me a nice sense of nostalgia lol
Shantelle18
Hey bitch!