Shantelle18

I keep thinking that maybe people have gotten bored with my story over time....my reads get lower with every chapter. I've got a few regular readers but it's hard keeping them. Is my story missing anything? Does it need more action or more back story etc etc?

Sherrysteele

@Shantelle18 no probs. xx
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Shantelle18

Thanks for the advice. I don't wanna have an action chapter and then another action chapter you know? I agree about the shopping chapters though. I just didn't think of that.
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Sherrysteele

@Shantelle18 i think maybe longer chapters. the last two seemed like fillers which you definitely do need in books but not a lot happened in either chapter. you probs could have put the two together instead of breaking the shopping trip into 2.
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Shantelle18

Thanks for picking up on my error. Lol it was such an obvious one! I'm still going over chapter 17 atm. It's got a bit of detail in it and I've had to do my research on it for it to make sense.

Sherrysteele

@Shantelle18 next*
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Sherrysteele

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@Shantelle18 no problemo. i think its the bext sentence it says shot instead of shit too.
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JoyCronje

Is it insomnia? Or something similar? So I'm guessing Wattpad is a great distraction then, right?

Sherrysteele

@JoyCronje its called Ehlers-danlos syndrome and unfortunately insomnia is just one of the many symptoms.  wattpad is an awesome distraction! Especially when I find a good author.
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JoyCronje

@Sherrysteele. Aww so sweet. We are
          6hrs behind you then. Unless
          You're on the east coast..
          30mins till I leave the office and they're feeling so long!!

Sherrysteele

@JoyCronje lts 12.50am here. I am in Melbourne,  Victoria. I hope the last 30 minutes of your work day fly by. x
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JoyCronje

@sherrysteele. What he said*points up* I also stopped in to mention the kid in ur pic is so cute. Mine is similarly adorable and now I'm missing her, sitting at the office.

Sherrysteele

@JoyCronje thanks so much. loving your story. I'm in australia so my little ladies are snoozing atm.
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Cashjo

Hi Sherry Steele!
          
          You name sounds like you should be a badass detective solving murders in a crime ridden city!
          
          Anyway Just saying thanks for voting on our book Blink, all the way to 21!
          
          Awesome.
          
          Steve & @JoyCronje

Sherrysteele

@Cashjo haha thanks i think my name is pretty awesome! I'm enjoying your story. I'm glad John is back to his old self.
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