Hey there Shiyong,
Just passing by to thank you for following, I know I should have thanked you ages ago, but I was on hiatus and haven't been on Wattpad for a while.
Arigato ~
@ShiYong3699 I added some comments to some of the chapters. I think the biggest thing I can pick out is to try and add more of a 'Rina and Kakashi, Daughter and Father' kind of side story to it, or else it really feels like you are just retelling the story but with Rina included.
@ShiYong3699 that's fine! And also of ur in need of an editor let me know! I'm hiring myself out as a free editor (I just do the basic editing punctuation, add missing words etec.).
Pm me if ur interested!
@MrMumbles
Thanks! I'm glad you like the.... Covers? Please read it. Sorry if there are mistakes....it may not be that good but do comment and vote...love to hear what you think.
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