I loved the way u crafted skylar firegold and her journey at Hogwarts. But....i would like to point out one thing i felt while reading the story. I haven't finished yet. But i am writing this now that i wont forget my point. So, here it is;
First thing, the series is called Harry Potter Series. Not Skylar Nova Firegold and this and that. And this is Harry's journey and not hers. I m saying this because u made it like SHE is the protegonist. Every path Harry went through, she is there. It is really annoying because u made it everything about her. (Everything u wrote is so good..i m just pointing out what i felt). For instance, Harry's occlumency lessons with Snape. It was his lessons. Why did she get involved? It was his place to find out everything Snape felt. Like bullied by marauders. It was his his place to find out horcruxes. Not her. She could have just informed them everything and see what's happening and how harry and the order would deal with it. She could have informed about Triwizard tournament and watched. No..she had to get involved in everything. Interfere in everything. We get it she knows everything. But she doesn't have to show off. Out of all ppl she chose Draco to tell everything. The One Voldemort could easily access. And the Slytherin House, we get it not every Slytherin is evil if thats what u wanted to show. But she got involved there also and changed their pov. Its really annoying after a point.
Thank you