ShibangiDas

So I started watching Banana Fish and I'm traumatized already.

ShibangiDas

@Abirbhattacharya82 lmao chill this has happened before. 
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Abirbhattacharya82

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S1P234

I loved the way u crafted skylar firegold and her journey at Hogwarts. But....i would like to point out one thing i felt while reading the story. I haven't finished yet. But i am writing this now that i wont forget my point. So, here it is;
          
          First thing, the series is called Harry Potter Series. Not Skylar Nova Firegold and this and that. And this is Harry's journey and not hers. I m saying this because u made it like SHE is the protegonist. Every path Harry went through, she is there. It is really annoying because u made it everything about her. (Everything u wrote is so good..i m just pointing out what i felt). For instance, Harry's occlumency lessons with Snape. It was his lessons. Why did she get involved? It was his place to find out everything Snape felt. Like bullied by marauders. It was his his place to find out horcruxes. Not her. She could have just informed them everything and see what's happening and how harry and the order would deal with it. She could have informed about Triwizard tournament and watched. No..she had to get involved in everything. Interfere in everything. We get it she knows everything. But she doesn't have to show off. Out of all ppl she chose Draco to tell everything. The One Voldemort could easily access. And the Slytherin House, we get it not every Slytherin is evil if thats what u wanted to show. But she got involved there also and changed their pov. Its really annoying after a point. 
          Thank you

yawningyoon

WHATTTTT LMFOAOA GET OUT AND DONT READ IT BYE I LOVE POWERFUL OCS don’t be a hater and just scroll off like the fact you came on here just to post this tangent of your unwanted opinion is kinda crazy 
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AURALYNX

@S1P234 its a fanfic all about her life of course it would be all about her and she’d be included in everything, if you really wanted her to be a side character then why read it??? just go read the original series. this is a story about a girl who stops war and how else would we get to know her better and how she learned everything, if shes not gonna be involved in most scenes then how else will we find out her story and how she literally ‘stopped war’??? if you really want her to not be involved go read the harry potter series and imagine her as a side character, im sure it wouldn’t be a problem as what you wanted from this FANFIC is it to not be about her this is just unnecessarily rude to the author, if you’re gonna say stupid stuff like this just don’t read it.
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girlwithlovebts00

@S1P234 how dumb can one be. go read the original stories prick.
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