Ringab3l

Hey, I have a story but I need you to read it before I submit it here. I want your feedback and how to improve it.

Ringab3l

I will send it to different people and you were in my list so I would like a feedback and want to see how other people see it
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Shibi9i

@Ringab3l Why me tho? I'm not much of a writer so I do not know how much help I would be
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Aiiishi

Akame.....?
          o...O

Aiiishi

@Shibi9i Meh~
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Shibi9i

@Aiiishi ur lame thats what
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Aiiishi

hehehee....whaat...bakaaaa
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