KhansaEman16

Assalam u alaikum... How are you... I'm a new writer... I recently start publishing my story... Please check out my story "KHALISH" Do vote and comment on It I'll do the same inshallah.... https://www.wattpad.com/story/357316200?utm_source=android&utm_medium=com.whatsapp.w4b&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=KhansaEman16

Shimmer28645

@KhansaEman16 walaikum assalam dear I'm fine alhamdulillah, what about you?.
            
            I have read your story and it's amazing but you just need to add some details about the character.... you're doing great but the point is, you have to make the relations clear between the characters.
            
            Ur already doing great  just a little push up and I know you can do it girl
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