Hey there, Thank you for reading (really reading) "Hearts on fire."
I have seen many kinds of readers, the ones who read and randomly vote on chapters, the ones who vote on all chapters, the ones who only comment when there is anything disagreeable going on to criticize, the ones who randomly comment on one specific anecdote where everyone else comments, the ones who vote and comment but have no clue what is going on in the story, and then there are people like you.
Any author really appreciates when they get votes, when someone takes interest and puts effort to come up with theories and questions about what would happen in the story, it makes the creator of the work feel like it was all worth it.
I wouldn't say Hearts on fire was my best work in terms of writing style, but I am proud of the plot I have written. I hope you got all your answers. I worked really hard to close all the loopholes and the open ends.
All in all, what I am trying to say is, I really appreciate you giving a chance to this story when most people here want to read stories for smuts or they look for cliche plots. You were a great reader.
Thank you very much. :) Have a great day!