@ShinigamiKuudere
DIO
Ho… mukatta kuruno ka? Nigetsu ni kono DIO ni chikazuite kuruno ka? Sekkaku sofu no Josefu ga watashi no Za Warudo no shotai wo. Shiken shuryu chaimu chokuzen made mondai yo toitte iru jukensee ne you na? Kisshi koita kibun de wo shietekure ta to yuu no ni?
Hi Shinigami Kuudere can you please give some advice on how to write fight scenes?
Btw, good job with the separation of dialogues, texts, and description. It’s a lot better like this, wouldn’t you agree?
My Books to help with writing list has an entire book dedicated for that in fact.
About the fights, I don’t know how to describe exactly. I just like, picture the fight in my mind( Taking into account The capabilities of each character, fight style and the surroundings of the battle.) Also, try not be go into much detail with each strike, leave a bit for the readers imagination.
Hi Shinigami Kuudere can you please take a look at my book?
Hi, I finished publishing the chapter, I know it’s a lot of time after my promise but I kind of been lacking ideas, concentration. And this b*tch over here.
*Speaks the lad pointing at time*
But it’s also my fault as that motherf*cker
*Points at inspiration*
Acts like:
Me:*Writing and correcting*
Ideas:Aight, imma head out.
Hi ShinigamiKuudere
I love how one of the tags in your book is just motivation
Finished reading the truth behind the 300 and Leonidas, and I’m quite disappointed…. I know that myths aren’t always true and all, and that they exaggerated some details, but damn. I admired Leonidas since I was 9 years old, for his fight, the strategies, how he motivated his troops to follow even in the nightmarish and suicidal situation, his valiant determination, standing proud at the face of death, even though being a human, a real person, only with the strength of his troops(Which were 6200 against 200 000) and his wits. Though the part in which he fought to death with 300 hoplites to give time for the majority of the troops to escape was true, the Spartans used his sacrifice in what would have been one of the most greatest propagandistic phenomenon of history.
HEY GUYS UPDATE OF DEVIL GENESIS:ALPHA AND OMEGA ARRIVED.
Please comment on what you like or don’t, imma try and correct mistakes so, don’t hold back.
Pero- ¿¡Hablas inglés!?
Hey people, sorry for not updating. (I haven’t abandoned the project) it’s just that I’m having a writer block(I think it was called like that) and nothing comes up on my mind, worry not, I will do my best to update.