I've been getting a lot of DMs about 'just a little chunk of hope.' From my komahina book, and let me just say this: I was 11 when I wrote that. I didn't know any better and my only way to cope with my trauma was to write really disturbing stories. If you looked at my stevonnie fan fiction, you'll find that it's extremely gorey. It's a way to cope for me other then smoking and self harm. I'm going to say this again. If you don't like it, don't read it.
And I will be re-writing the oneshot. If I have the motivation.