Shira_Syd

You are not alone Part-2 here now to read... Who is that figure watching Liam and Riana secretly? 
          	https://www.wattpad.com/story/410163820

sloanemrph202

well done  I came across Edited Lives and the opening immediately pulled me in.
          The moment with the guard and the boy in the hoodie creates a lot of tension, especially when the boy reacts with something that doesn’t feel like fear or anger, but something more unsettling and aware. The line about “can you see it too?” really stands out and adds mystery right away.
          I also like how quickly the shift happens from that moment into Liam waking up somewhere completely different—it gives the story a strong psychological sci-fi feel, like reality itself is unstable.
          It’s a short start, but it already feels intriguing. I’ll be keeping up with it as you continue.
          really really  interesting.

sloanemrph202

can i get your e mail we can talk more there am really happy to work with you
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Shira_Syd

@sloanemrph202 sure, Go on... I am listening. 
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nancyspyro

Hiii I saw your work 

Shira_Syd

@nancyspyro I wouldn't call it hobby... But it started as that. 
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nancyspyro

@nancyspyro wooo your story is really impressive  u r soo talented keep working so writing is your main hobby right ??? 
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Shira_Syd

Shira here. I have been keeping this novel idea for 4 years now, incomplete, stopped in the middle. But I am starting it from the beginning now. So I thought, why not complete it with you guys? 
          
          I am starting now and will write it all and complete it right in front of you...