@Milkycoconutcream hi!! Never fear the haters! I genuinely feel like no matter how good your story is, everyone will always find a flaw in it, my best advice is to just go for it! I mean just like mine, I received a lot of hate for putting character descriptions, when it was really for writing purposes- it is creative writing hahah. But just go for it! Write what your heart desires.
And I don’t really know the recipe to writing a good story, but I do know that writing from the heart helps! I’ve personally always written mine with the readers (MCs) point of view, or vice versa (Gojos POV, etc.), it helps to think of how do you think they might be feeling at that moment. It also helps to put a piece of your own experiences in them! :))
It’s your fantasy, your book, you get to decide what you wanna write about :)) that’s the beauty of it!