Shirayuki_343

I've been... pondering...
          	
          	That maybe I should rewrite my first story, the Arknights x Bloodborne one, because sometimes I felt that further down the story it felt like there were some disconnects to the earlier story, and that there are some plotholes here and there...

Thhuulium

@Shirayuki_343 I feel the same way when looking back at my first book, and have been contemplating doing about the same thing. So I think what you want to do is completely fine!
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WilliamCotton9

@Shirayuki_343 I absolutely love the details that you had for it, but yeah, there were some obvious plot holes/unexplained things those who know the lore of either game.
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Shirayuki_343

I've been... pondering...
          
          That maybe I should rewrite my first story, the Arknights x Bloodborne one, because sometimes I felt that further down the story it felt like there were some disconnects to the earlier story, and that there are some plotholes here and there...

Thhuulium

@Shirayuki_343 I feel the same way when looking back at my first book, and have been contemplating doing about the same thing. So I think what you want to do is completely fine!
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WilliamCotton9

@Shirayuki_343 I absolutely love the details that you had for it, but yeah, there were some obvious plot holes/unexplained things those who know the lore of either game.
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Shirayuki_343

Is this a bug?
          
          I got "Session Expired" notification and had to log in again, but after I logged in I checked my stories, and then my drafts.
          
          And I lost all my drafts, it's empty...

JesterX3

@Shirayuki_343 
            
            Dunno why Wattpad didn't send me a notification of your announcement. I've never experienced this before but it sounds like you encountered a session timeout issue, which can happen if your session on Wattpad expires or if there is a temporary disconnect between your device and Wattpad's servers. Unfortunately, this kind of disruption can result in unsaved drafts being lost if they were not backed up externally. For future safety, I recommend regularly saving your work in a stable text-editing platform like Google Docs and/or Microsoft Word
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WilliamCotton9

Story idea for your rwby/arknights/bloodborne story. So when the scene that cardin is pulling on velvet's ears happens, it triggers ruby, so she goes on a minirant that ends up being full-blown agier racism that starts off being really soft but she progressively gets louder till the cafeteria ends up hearing her and when she finally notices the silence, she looks over and the entire cafeteria is completely gobsmacked at what just came out of this cute little red/white girls mouth and, Blake, still struggling to process, asks wiess if ruby is somehow related to her and yang busts out laughing at the question. 

Shirayuki_343

@WilliamCotton9 Nice, I'm going to try to implement that, but the funny thing is, I actually had a similar idea like that, to reveal Ruby's full blown average Ægirian racism but during Oobleck's history lesson, but your idea ain't that bad though.
            
            Let's see what i can do about it.
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Shirayuki_343

Hmmm...
          
          For some reason, I want to continue my Bloodborne x Arknights story...
          
          But my head keeps whispering to me... 
          
          To make a,
          
          Bloodborne x RWBY x Arknights fanfic...
          
          Putting some Arknights characters into it, whilst also putting my Bloodborne fanfic's Hunter from my story into it...
          
          Well...
          
          Let's see how it goes...
          
          This might be fun!

BlueRacer2728

@Shirayuki_343 are the two stories connected
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Beast21not7

Oh, my bad, I ment lady Maria.
            
            I look forward to this development.
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Shirayuki_343

@Beast21not7 No no, not Lady Maria, Marie is the Doll's name
            
            Although, you did give me an idea to bring her into the fold.
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RedDawn2101

Hate to bother u, but is there any word for the fans of pale blood hunter in terra?

Shirayuki_343

@RedDawn2101 At the time, I'm still writing on a draft for a side story, the main chapter is still on the planning stage
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RedDawn2101

@RedDawn2101 correction the palebloodedhinter in terra
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Shirayuki_343

I've just watched Dune part 02
          
          It was peak cinema
          
          The story is amazing
          
          Stilgar is funny, yet it was also scary on how he fall into fanaticism
          
          It was perhaps the scariest 'horror' movie I've ever seen and it wasn't even a horror movie.
          
          Yet, after watching it, a stupid Idea formed in my mind...
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          Arknights x Dune?
          Sarkaz Messiah Figure from the Ancient Times against the World?

bismarck195

@Shirayuki_343 just watch it earlier it was AMAZING if you're gonna write a story about it go for it
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YuriRosalin

@Shirayuki_343 Well, if you do the book I'm sure it will be good. Even though I haven't seen the movie Dune!
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