ShirleyRose777

@Madhurijoshi8 oh yeahh.. absolutely
            
            Thank you for letting me know
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            I'll be editing it asap... Thank you again!!!

@Madhurijoshi8 I can't figure out how to reply where you asked. I just meant to point out to that the line, changes the voice from first person to narrator. It's brief, but such can trip up a reader. I'm enjoying the story. It's hard not to notice little things as a writer. You've set the mood so well that this line upsets it, but only for a moment. Like being on a romantic date and they take a call from their mom, not the end of the night, but a lost to the mood. I hope that makes sense.

@Madhurijoshi8 Hey, I've started reading it. Made it to the stature. I like it so far, that's why a followed. Have a good one.