rxcklessniall
I saw your comment & I really appreciate that you love my story but 1) you could've said it differently 2) it's MY story & I can have MY characters say whatever I WANT them to say! I could have them walk around on their hands all day if that's how I wanted them to act! I could have them talk pig Latin if that's what I wanted them to do! And it's FICTION! As in NOT REAL! It doesn't have to be accurate! If I was to use British slang wrong you would criticize that too & I would look like an idiot so it's easier & more comfortable for me to write how I talk! It's unnatural for me to say "you all" & you don't know maybe Tatum's southern charm rubbed off on them! Plus once I'm completely done with the story I'm going to go back & do some major editing bc I know it needs it really bad! If that one little thing is bothering you that much, then don't read it! Simple as that!
rxcklessniall
@rxcklessniall aww I really appreciate that! That makes me want to keep writing when people tell me things like that! Trust me I never thought of myself as a writer because my papers in school were always awful. I love that I guess give you the inspiration to write! When I read other people's stories I'm always like why can they write so well mine suck compared to theirs and I try to do what they do but I realized I'm not them and their writing is unique just like mine and yours. Just keep trying and give it your own flare! You'll get there don't worry! It just may take some time! And of course we can be friends! :)
Short_Fanatic
@rxcklessniall truss I will always read your story. It is so well written and well described. I honestly think of how you writevyour stories to try and create mine. But they always fail... hope we can be friends Erin!