SutapaSarbabhom

Did you read some one bitchy reply against Anisha 
          I can't understand these useless people mentally 
          Please reply something to her

ShreyaJain4

@SutapaSarbabhom definitely i will support her☺
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SutapaSarbabhom

@SutapaSarbabhom it's okay but we should always support Anisha 
            She is going through some much 
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ShreyaJain4

@SutapaSarbabhom i think that person has deleted the account. Hey but thank you for for me if not for you i wouldn't have known. So thank you
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TwistedApology

Hey, thank you for voting on my story 'Dangerously Discontent'. I hope you enjoyed reading it! It would be very kind of you if you would let me know what you thought about the book by leaving a comment! Also please share and support me. Have a great day ♥ thank you!!!!

ShreyaJain4

actually it wasnt any part in particular but somtimes it was a bit difficult to relate... umm like i couldnt tell who us talking to whom in the chapters wen all were at firdos n when you know the family came to know about the wedding of mahnoor.....
            I hope you would get what i m trying to as i know really good in expressing my thoughts in words....
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TwistedApology

@TwistedApology oh never would i feel offended! I've been looking for someone to give me a constructive criticism  so i can improve the story! Don't be hesitant, please elaborate what part you did not like and what wasn't proper,i would rewrite it ! :)
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ShreyaJain4

@TwistedApology 
            I really enjoyed reading the story loved the end especially not like clichè story ending.....
            But it was a bit confusing in between....
            
            P.S. please dont feel offended if i spoke out of line for your story.....dont get me wrong ok...
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