WordWandererrr

Hey!
          Would mean a lot if you give a chance to my book❤️
          
          Step into the intense world of Caleb and Elena-a story where love, dominance, and passion collide. As boundaries are tested and desires ignite, their journey will take you to the edge of obsession.
          
          Are you ready to experience the fire?
          
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SutapaSarbabhom

Did you read some one bitchy reply against Anisha 
          I can't understand these useless people mentally 
          Please reply something to her

ShreyaJain4

@SutapaSarbabhom definitely i will support her☺
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SutapaSarbabhom

@SutapaSarbabhom it's okay but we should always support Anisha 
            She is going through some much 
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ShreyaJain4

@SutapaSarbabhom i think that person has deleted the account. Hey but thank you for for me if not for you i wouldn't have known. So thank you
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TwistedApology

Hey, thank you for voting on my story 'Dangerously Discontent'. I hope you enjoyed reading it! It would be very kind of you if you would let me know what you thought about the book by leaving a comment! Also please share and support me. Have a great day ♥ thank you!!!!

ShreyaJain4

actually it wasnt any part in particular but somtimes it was a bit difficult to relate... umm like i couldnt tell who us talking to whom in the chapters wen all were at firdos n when you know the family came to know about the wedding of mahnoor.....
            I hope you would get what i m trying to as i know really good in expressing my thoughts in words....
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TwistedApology

@TwistedApology oh never would i feel offended! I've been looking for someone to give me a constructive criticism  so i can improve the story! Don't be hesitant, please elaborate what part you did not like and what wasn't proper,i would rewrite it ! :)
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ShreyaJain4

@TwistedApology 
            I really enjoyed reading the story loved the end especially not like clichè story ending.....
            But it was a bit confusing in between....
            
            P.S. please dont feel offended if i spoke out of line for your story.....dont get me wrong ok...
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