Hey sweet, inhope you doing well. I'm not a that problem in writing as I'm new writer just like you but I just wanted to help you out. If you want people to read your book the make sure you're doing the same.
Read your own chapters again and again as a reader, it won't only increase the views but also will help you to find out your mistakes.
I hope you don't mind my words.
Tnx.
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