Poopysmum75

I hope you don't mind me messaging you but i wondered if i could ask you a few questions about Betrayal and Redemption. 

Shriya_reddy

@Poopysmum75 That's awesome! Looking forward to read more of your work :)
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Poopysmum75

Thank you so much for your input, I totally agree with you on the cover,  I just can't seem to get it right (I never was very arty lol) I'm glad you like the idea of an epilogue its something that's been bugging me so i will definitely get started on it.  Thank you again for taking the time to read my book and for the amazing comments. 
            
            Just a wee sneak peak....I have finished 3 chapters of wolves of hollow ridge book 2 which will be Beth and Ben's story its called Mate Betrayed (although that title may change) hope to have a few more chapters done over the next week or so, so hopefully will publish chapter 1 soon. 
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Shriya_reddy

@Poopysmum75 
            
            1. For the cover, I liked it though the first thing I can think of is the grey border and the red font. These are not really a harmonizing color combo and the red font specifically gives a bit of a grim impression you know - a little bloody. Your story was quite a positive one since the it's about redemption and not revenge. So that's where I see a contradiction. Sorry for the essay, I have been involved in too many creative projects as of late so I had to do loads of research on these things :D
            
            2. I don't think there's anything left unfinished.. whatever questions there were got revealed later on as the story progressed.
            
            3. Epilogue - Hell Yes! The both of them were not in the same place when they got "together", however briefly. So it'd be nice to take a peek at how their relationship is like and has progressed when they are just.. a normal couple (despite their heavy past). It's like an icing on a cake :D
            
            I hope this helps! Do let me know if I can help in anyway, I'll be more than happy to. :)
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