@SanyaSikarwar Your story Devil Guardian has a really interesting concept and dark vibe, which I liked. The idea is good — it just needs better execution. I’m sharing this only because I see potential in your writing.”
“One more thing I wanted to mention gently is the age of the characters. In the story, both of them feel quite young for the situations and emotional depth they are placed in. Personally, I feel it would be more believable if Jungkook’s age were around 17–18 and Taehyung’s around 21–22. If their ages are kept too low, some readers might feel a little uncomfortable or find it slightly unusual while reading. Adjusting the ages could help the story feel more natural and relatable for readers.”