ShuTaku78

I've got some good news for those who have been waiting for the continuation of the fanfic: "A different past" ;)
          	
          	I've practically finished all my last drafts of The disease of lies, I'm getting my hands free for something else now.
          	
          	The story's profile is already updated :)

SoloAct281

@ShuTaku78 Still writing A different Past?
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mito1109

I am done with my essay I just need a little help how do make a scene change like cutting to the next scene

ShuTaku78

@mito1109 Oh seems fine as I can see
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mito1109

Sorta, I now have to wait for my teacher to put that grade into the system to know my real grade. Currently I have a 90.05%
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ShuTaku78

@mito1109 Is it considered good in your country?
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mito1109

Currently I am finished with the rough draft. I just need help with some things. What symbol do you use for the dialogue and inner monologue.

ShuTaku78

@mito1109 okay, I hope this helped
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mito1109

Well sort of. Technically I am writing a summary of your fanfic. To make it a short story that is what I was working on.. also I have to write it in a 3rd person pov, that is why I asked you how you use this (.")
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ShuTaku78

@mito1109 Oh, you're writing a fanfic? For dialogue, I simply use quotation marks: "Dialogue with ppl." For thoughts or inner monologue, I don’t use any special formatting. I don’t think it’s necessary, especially when writing in first person. In first-person POV, the narrator is basically the character, so their thoughts and monologues are naturally part of the narration. However, for dialogue, always enclose it in quotation marks ("...").
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ShuTaku78

I've got some good news for those who have been waiting for the continuation of the fanfic: "A different past" ;)
          
          I've practically finished all my last drafts of The disease of lies, I'm getting my hands free for something else now.
          
          The story's profile is already updated :)

SoloAct281

@ShuTaku78 Still writing A different Past?
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Oldmails

Also, I will suggest to decipit the negative nature of the characters, The will make the story ,more grounded, In reality and even in fiction like oregair selfish characterrs exist, that will make the story more grounded. I hope you keep this in mind in your next story.

ShuTaku78

@Oldmails I get what you mean, I'll keep that in mind. The only character I've managed to do that was with Hachiman yet, so I'll see how I will do with the others.
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