Arthur0190b

Okay ....so read the story and ..I must say ..broo ..it's good ..but..u know u can skip some parts like --" 2 years later ..Tapu and advika giving their final exams ..and he thought why she cried ..who made her cry " ...or make them stay together in some foreign country to study ." ..
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          Just saying all ..this .. thought it would help to make you write more stories...

ShubhamBansal807

Bro taking it slow because im going to introducing some more family characters in upcoming chapters
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