Shubh -The slayer

Please give me your feedback siz

Heyy
          
          I'm sorry i just slide into your profile but
          I'm new here .. and i have my first book on Wattpad please read and vote . I need your feedback so please let me know my story is good or not so I can try better .. please 
          I think you'd like this story: "RIDDHI : her broken love and his vengeful intentions" by alove_for_Advik on Wattpad https://www.wattpad.com/story/391157802?utm_source=android&utm_medium=whatsapp&utm_content=story_info℘_page=story_details_button℘_uname=alove_for_Advik
          
          

Sorry wonderful fellow, for barging into your message board and posting
          
          But I don't have any other chance, to bring my story to your notice.
          
          I know you will be getting irritated by seeing story recommendation, but I'm  a new author and writing a story and need support and healthy criticism, so I find you as an apt person for doing so.
          
          Would you like to give my story a chance?
          Please read it na...
          
          Thank you.
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/395152747?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=Rosie1087
          

Hi. Please read my book "before the semester ends" your support will mean a lot to me :)

I had updated my story Beintehaan ( A cursed love story) chapter-12

Epilogue of Vani: a saga of Mystery and Love is updated
          
          Also the prologue of second story .

So I wrote Vani: A saga of Mystery and Love as alternate storyline from the start of Naagin 5 when Veer and Bani meet first Now I have decided to write another spin off that starts at the ending of Naagin 5.
          
          Basically Vani:A saga of Mystery and Love is book of spin offs of Naagin 5 the first started at the start of Naagin 5 Now I am writing another spin off that starts at end of Naagin 5
          Same characters and this spin-off will have same back story as naagin 5 .
          
          I have decided to  write something new with respect to Vani as not many or any  authors I say have explored it much .It was always on my mind.
          
          

@blacksvl Okk I will 

@blacksvl But I am thinking it is a huge story so how can I add in  short tales It's like a spin off of Vani:a saga of Mystery and Love how does that sound I am so confused .If I post it in short stories it won't be short it is spin off of Vani's original story But I don't want to make ppl confuse too 

After completing the vampire story Love Between Us i have decided to write alternate version of Naagin 5 ending like what if type story You will get to read something different this time something totally different.I will write that alternate story in Our Vani:a saga of Mystery and Love only as sequel ...❤️