Shumone4

@JasonKucharik no problem. I'm really interested in where the story is going. keep up the great work

JasonKucharik

Thanks again :-)  I will try my best!  Feel free to comment on any of the chapters and let me know what you think, I love getting feedback from readers.
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Kuronoshio

Thanks for reading The Loyalty Tests and giving me a vote. 
          It's a work in progress, but sometimes I despair, so it's great to have some encouragement. 
          I see I'm in very good company in the people you've voted for, which means a lot.
          If you ever want an opinion, then drop me a line.

mhj873

Thank you so much for reading and your votes. I really appreciate it. I'm glad you made it to the end, there are a fair few mistakes I still need to iron out and I apologise for that! 
          I see you have also been reading the work of my good friend Dean. Excellent choice, you obviously have good taste :)  
          Kind regards, Mark

Shumone4

@deancmoore I'm sure you'll enjoy Brandywhine. It is less a story of the reinvention of one's self as it is a questioning of the idea of faith. I don't want to give anything away for you, though. And i finally started getting into The Hundredth Year Man. You truly have a gift for writing superb science fiction. And I love the differences in scale between Hundredth and Renaissance. From evolving a single person by testing him with every different idea known to man to pitting two contradictory views of a subject against each other by utilizing entire species. It's a true joy to compare and contrast the two.