Hello, I can't comment on your book because I don't know your language.
Please, my friend really needs your support. Supporting her book is very important.
If you post a chapter, write to me and I'll vote for it again.
@aylinart don't worryyy it's okiii .. you can vote .. and if you want you can comment in any language you know ( I will translate hehe ) and send me link of your book so I can vote for it